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can i clean your tears
with window wipers and bleach
to make them pretty?
hey you it's a haiku
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Hi there! I've chosen you as the 25th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week :D (Big Grin)

Beautifully written. The concept is rather interesting and visual at the same time and I really like the originality of your choice of phrases and wording to describe such a vivid scene. Very well done with this, it was really enjoyable to read.